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Baptizer
2nd December 2001, 01:09 AM
Hey guys!!
My first story has been published at www.2darkpark.com please go over and read it and let me know what you think! its really short so dont think itll eat up more than 1 minute!! Just let me know what you think, and ill make sure to keep you in tune to the 2nd part, which should be available next week!
Mad Bad John
2nd December 2001, 01:33 AM
Not bad Bap! - however based on your previous communiques a certain amount of trepidation is expected , I suspect a revelation about Hot Dogs in the next part!

Keep it up !

Regards MBJ
Snufkin
2nd December 2001, 01:41 AM
hey very cool Bap! nice one
Baptizer
2nd December 2001, 02:50 AM
hey thanks guys...
was trying to do some 'serious' humor....instead of the crazy-offthewall-wacko humor i portray in this forum sometimes...hehehe. Thanks for input guys, ill make sure to update you when i release part 2!
Surgeon General
2nd December 2001, 05:28 AM
I am just woundering if you are some way going to include your clown dressed doggies in the next part:D
speculative
3rd December 2001, 05:40 AM
lol :D Nice! Good use of the illustration as well. :)

-speculative
Baptizer
3rd December 2001, 01:00 PM
Thanks guys.......
I am going to have part 2 up and it should be a bit more lengthy. I am hoping to have it up by the end of the week. But the site still doesnt get many visitors.......sigh........the work must go on though! Thanks for input guys, thanks for visiting!
Pistol
3rd December 2001, 01:19 PM
pretty good Bap,but you did fail to say that they all had a high pitched voice afterwards lol
Baptizer
3rd December 2001, 01:23 PM
lol hahaha!!! Damn, good idea. I needed material to make it longer......too bad i didnt consult you before hand! hehe.
Pistol
3rd December 2001, 01:38 PM
Hey Bap you did know that you can allways tell the weather by how your ***** feel, right,well the next time you get cold or you go swimming you know what happens, right,well when it gets hot and muggy you can also tell :D
Baptizer
3rd December 2001, 01:43 PM
lol hehehehehehhe.......
Never realized that pistol.....hehehe. :D :D
Pistol
3rd December 2001, 01:45 PM
lol
The Therion
3rd December 2001, 01:45 PM
lol i agree with pistol , high pitched voices ! lol

PLUS they 77% of those that had to part with their balls, got fat within the year :p